Death of Universe

[Bothari]

This story is older then some stars ,we are old oldest from all others in this universe ,we haw learned so much but forgoten eaven more , in aver ignorance we helped to many races ,but with time for no good reason younger races started to hate us , war has started trilions had died but we still hesitated to use ultimate weapons cos we haw hoped that they will stop and learn from us ,and so aver empire has fallen cos of mercy from elders ,in the end hand full of us and 10 ships is all that was left from once proud race. With anger in hearts we left known universe , travel alone has lasted over 5 000 years , another 500 000 years has past in rebuilding and now we are ready ,this time we haw learned and know what to do ,eaven now will i am writing this flashes from death of stars can be seen fru flagships force fields , they haw started this 1 000 000 years ago but we will finish it ,there will be no mercy all will die .all stars in universe will die to ,only one will be left for us to use.Message is sent to all planets " Children of old ones ,time has com for u to pay for sins of your elders ,death is coming for all cos ARATHIARI are back,time has come for universe to be reborn "



honest opinion plis ,is it good and shud i do full story .thx

[Desmond Cheese]

It would be an interesting tale.

Just fix the english and grammar before grammar nazis murder you

[filomenasmith]

This story is definitely an interesting one. I always believe that some situation cannot be explained in words. Though this is really very nice.

[Space Man]

very very nice story, but its to short